Collaborative doc

Collaborative Doc

For Digi Day Chloe, Nikita and I made a shared document and wrote some stories about one of these characters. I liked writing a story about Ancient Rome and it was good to see what the others were writing and having people comment while I was writing. It was good reading more advice on how to make it better instantly. 

Some of our comments.

My Holiday

The Holidays

In the Holidays I went to the West Coast to see my dad. It was a three hour drive from Christchurch to my dad's house; it got really boring. There was lots of beautiful scenery.  

This is where we went.

We went on many walks.
This is the first one we went on, The Brunner Mines historic site.

This is Henry my sisters cat.

This is me and my dad's dog RJ

My 100wc

The Wedding 

The sea glistened like a sparkling, silver mirror. I could see the reflection of the moon shining down on us. I glanced over at Melissa. I Started sweating; my palms were saturated. I wanted to say something but I couldn't speak. She looked at me, her smile glowing in the moonlight.

"Ahh Melissa I want to ask you something"

"What?" She said shyly.

"Melissa Ella-Grace Tedd will you marry me?"

"Yes Yes"

The next day they were married; it was a small gathering of friends and family. They drove off into the sunset and lived happily ever after.